“ I think what you composed was actually very reasonable.
However, what about this? what if you composed a catchier post
title? I ain't suggesting your content isn't solid., however
suppose you added a headline that grabbed a person's attention? I
mean blog topic is a little vanilla. You could look at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create news
headlines to grab people to open the links. You might add a video
or a pic or two to get readers excited about what you've got to say.
Just my opinion, it might bring your website a little bit
more interesting. ”