“ I think that what you composed was very reasonable.
However, think about this, suppose you typed a catchier title?
I am not saying your information isn't solid., however what if you added a post title
that grabbed people's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda boring.
You might look at Yahoo's front page and see how they write
article titles to get people to click. You might try adding a video or a pic or two to grab
readers interested about what you've written. In my opinion,
it would make your blog a little livelier. ”