“ I think that what you said made a lot of sense.
But, think on this, what if you added a little information? I
ain't suggesting your content isn't solid, but suppose you added a title that makes people want more?
I mean blog topic is kinda plain. You might look at Yahoo's home page and watch how
they create news headlines to get viewers interested.
You might add a video or a related pic or two to get people excited about what you've written. Just my opinion,
it could make your website a little bit more interesting. ”