“ I believe what you wrote was very reasonable. But, think
on this, suppose you added a little information? I am not saying your information isn't
good., but suppose you added a title to maybe get a person's attention? I mean blog
topic is kinda boring. You might look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create news headlines to get people to click.
You might add a related video or a picture or two to get people interested about everything've written. Just my opinion, it might bring your website a
little livelier. ”