“ I think what you posted was very reasonable. But, what about this?
what if you added a little information? I ain't suggesting your content isn't good,
but suppose you added a title that grabbed a person's attention? I mean blog topic
is a little plain. You should peek at Yahoo's home page and note how they create news titles to
get people interested. You might add a video or
a picture or two to get readers excited about everything've written. In my opinion, it might make your website a
little bit more interesting. ”