“ I think that everything published was very reasonable.
But, what about this? what if you added a little information? I ain't suggesting your
information isn't solid, however what if you
added a title to maybe get people's attention? I mean blog topic is
a little boring. You could peek at Yahoo's home page and note how they write news
titles to grab viewers interested. You might add a video or a pic or
two to grab people excited about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it might make your blog a little bit more interesting. ”