“ I think that what you posted was actually very reasonable.
But, consider this, what if you typed a catchier title?
I am not suggesting your content is not solid,
but what if you added a title to maybe grab folk's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda vanilla.
You ought to look at Yahoo's home page and note
how they write news titles to grab viewers to click.
You might try adding a video or a related picture or two to grab people
excited about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it could make your website a little livelier. ”