“ I think that everything composed made a bunch of sense.
But, what about this? suppose you added a
little information? I am not saying your information isn't solid.,
however suppose you added a post title to maybe get
a person's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda vanilla.
You could glance at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create article titles to grab viewers to click.
You might add a related video or a related pic
or two to get people excited about what you've got to say.
Just my opinion, it could make your website a little bit
more interesting. ”